I Want to Be With You and Invisible: Songs Lyrics

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Summary: These songs tell about the feeling of someone who is falling in love, but unfortunately the girl that she loves chooses the other one.

I Want to Be With You

When I met you at the first time

There’s something special with it

I feel like my heart has a crush

To someone fills my loneliness

Like I’m walking through the time

I’m always thinking about it

Like every time I am in a rush

Try to find my own love

You are sunshine in my frail world

You make my lovely heart to unfold

I want to be with you

I’ll give you all away

I want to be with you

I’ll do it with my way

I want to be with you

I’ll hold you here to stay

I want to be with you

I’ll hug you by my clay

Like I’m walking through the time

I’m always thinking about it

Like every time I am in a rush

Try to find my own love

You are sunshine in my frail world

You make my lovely heart to unfold

I want to be with you

I’ll give you all away

I want to be with you

I’ll do it with my way

I want to be with you

I’ll hold you here to stay

I want to be with you

I’ll hug you by my clay

Finally I can take you here

Tie the sacred love together

Feel the mildness without tear

Share this happiness together

I want to be with you

I’ll give you all away

I want to be with you

I’ll do it with my way

I want to be with you

I’ll hold you here to stay

I want to be with you

I want to be with you

I’ll give you all away

I want to be with you

I’ll do it with my way

I want to be with you

I’ll hold you here to stay

I want to be with you

I want to be with you

I want to be with you

Forever..

Invisible

Standing on the road edge

Waiting for this heavy rain

There is nobody around me

Thinking ‘bout this emptyness

Then I’m looking someone there

Who is walking toward me

And then I realize it

It was her…my lovely girl

It turns out at the same time

She is walking with someone else

Oh girl..

Am I that invisible?

To be held by your hand

To be hug by your clay

Oh girl..

Am I so worthless?

To be treasured by your heart

To be touched by your love

Then I think it’s just a dream

But the pain is just real

I don’t know how to say

That you break…all my heart

It turns out at the same time

I know that you don’t love me

Oh girl..

Am I that invisible?

To be held by your hand

To be hug by your clay

Oh girl..

Am I so worthless?

To be treasured by your heart

To be touched by your love

My heart is just broken up

I think’t is not enough

My feeling just disappeared

I don’t believe in this faith

Oh girl..

Am I that invisible?

To be held by your hand

To be hug by your clay

Oh girl..

Am I so worthless?

To be treasured by your heart

To be touched..

Oh girl..

Am I so worthless?

To be treasured by your heart

To be touched by your love

Thank you notes:

Thanks to Muhammad Al-Ghifari (180410120038) for composing the songs and playing the instrument.

Thanks to Lidya Permata Sari (180410120069) for composing the songs.

References:

Budi – Do Re Mi

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Bunga Citra Lestari – Pernah Muda

Word count: 547

Links for Work Dramatizations:

https://soundcloud.com/fadil_tama/i-want-to-be-with-you

https://soundcloud.com/fadil_tama/invisible

3 thoughts on “I Want to Be With You and Invisible: Songs Lyrics

  1. Zitro Alviotti
    180410120125/ Class F

    Both of the songs are actually has a structured plot which makes the message of the song can be known easily by the listener. Moreover, the dictions are quiet easy to be understood except the word “clay” in both of the lyrics. I think it is too formal to use “clay” since the conept of the song is actually about love which the arrangement can be classified as a pop jazz which I conclude that it is an easy listening songs. And, for the dramatization on the second song, I felt quiet content since the way you show that you have surrendered to your hope is very natural as a man who is hurt by love.

    Word Count:116

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  2. 180410120069
    A

    Fadil, I like both of your songs. Their lyrics are very simple and easy to be understood by me as the listener. In the first song, I can see that the characterization of the boy is really emphasized by the lyrics. He is blinded by love that he will do everything to the girl whom he loves if he can be with her. It is seen by the repetition of “I want to be with you” in the song. Besides, the music of this song also describes the happy feeling of the boy who finds love in the girl.

    In contrast with the first song, the second song tells about the boy’s feeling in which he is sad and broken-hearted because the girl whom he loves, does not love him. The melody of the music which is slow describes the sad feeling.

    Word Count: 143

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  3. 180410120144
    G

    In “I Want to Be With You” you repeat the same lyric again and over again. You sing the lyric; “I want to be with you” and sing the other lyric and back to sing “I want to be with you again”. Mostly the other lyric in the song are interspersed by “I want to be with you” lyric. The pattern like this makes the lyric is important than other lyric. It’s making your purposes of your story delivered to the listeners, it’s very good. Because your story about the feeling of someone who is falling in love, I get the feeling of the character in your song lyric who want to describe her feeling and tell her crush that she want to be with him. So, your technique to deliver the feeling in the songs to the listeners is very good, I get it.

    (word count 145)

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