Summary: It’s about students who are locked in C building one night and scared by a girl.
A Girl in C Building
SOUND BELL RINGING, CROWDED SOUND
DEO: Hey, Rudi!
RUDI: Hey! How was your class?
DEO: Boring like usual.
RUDI: (Giggling) (Pause) Deo, look! My angel is coming.
RUDI: The long-black-hair and fair-skin girl. She’s so beautiful.
DEO: (Pause) You mean Fia? Are you insane?! I prefer to call her a ghost than a beautiful girl. Just so you know, her skin is not fair but pale. Seriously, she’s like
RUDI: Cut it off. Let’s get something to eat in cafeteria, shall we?
DEO: No, thanks. I must meet Mr. Bayu. See you in the next class then.
RUDI: Okay! See ya!
LECTURE: Good afternoon class.
STUDENTS: Good afternoon sir.
LEARNING ACTIVITY SOUND
DEO: (Whispering) Rudi, do you really like Fia? We were in the same high school by the way, she was my junior.
RUDI: (Whispering) Really?! Tell me more about her.
DEO: (Whispering) I’ll tell you after the class.
BELL RINGING, CROWDED PEOPLE SOUND
DEO: Damn! What took the class so long? Did the lecturer want us to sleep here? Geez. This building will be closed soon.
RUDI: Wait. I wanna go to toilet first.
DEO: Ah. Me too. Hurry Before this building is closed.
FOOTSTEP, DOOR OPEN, TOILET FLUSH FADED OUT SOUND
RUDI: Hey, I think we are the only ones in this building. (Pause) Ah, I am wrong. We are not the only ones, look there’s a girl
RUDI: The one in white dress who’s just entered to toilet.
DEO: Hah? Maybe you’re wrong.
DEO: We’re locked. What should we do then?! I don’t wanna sleep here!
RUDI: Calm down! Let’s call someone for help.
PHONE CALLING SOUND
Ah. Damn it. I don’t have enough credits. Try yours, De!
DEO: I left my cell phone in my bedroom. I think we really have to sleep here.
RUDI: It’s weird. The campus seems so quite tonight.
DEO: Tomorrow is holiday. Who wants to stay here right now? Except us!
CIGARETE LIGHTER, CIGARRETE BURNED SOUND
RUDI: Hey, tell me about Fia. You promised me.
DEO: (Pause) Well, (Narrating) She was my junior when I was at senior high school. She was so strange. She always looked pale with her long black hair, and we hardly
realized her presence. Sometimes, she might suddenly be next to you. Other students preferred to call her ghost. Some students in her class also told me that she
lives in a big ancient house. Her house fits her personality. Scary .The others said that she was really a ghost. One night, my friend passed, stopped by, and
examined her house. Then, she saw a girl sat on the tree. It was Fia. Do you think a normal girl will sit on a tree at night? Only a ghost will do that. After that incident, she always looked at my friend with bizarre stare.
LAMP OFF SOUND
Oh God! Now what? Electrical cut? Damn! It’s totally blackout now. What a bad day!
CHAIR DRAGGED SOUND
RUDI: What’s that? Is there anyone else or (Pause) something else in this building? I hear that there’s a girl ghost lives here.
DEO: Stop it! You scare me.
RUDI: Let’s go and check it out. Probably, someone’s still here.
LIGHTER OPENED, FOOTSTEPS, DOOR OPEN SOUND
RUDI: Is that the girl I saw before? What’s she doing here? Sleeping on the floor?
DEO: No. (Pause) It’s a corpse. Look, (Pause) there’s blood on her dress. And this is (Pause) Fia. Come on! Let’s get out of here!
RUDI: No. Wait. Maybe we can save her. I’m not sure she’s dead.
DEO: What?! She is a corpse now. She’s dead. Don’t irradiate her face, it’s scary. Come on. We have to get out from this place. Come on.
RUDI: Don’t grab my leg Deo. Your hand is frozen.
DEO: That’s not mine. My hands are here. (Pause) She’s awake. She’s awake. (Tone up)
RUDI & DEO: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
PEOPLE RUNNING, BREATHING SOUND
DEO: See. It’s true. She is really a ghost.
RUDI: Calm down, Deo. Now, where is she?
DEO: I don’t know.(Pause) Hey Rudi, control your breath. She may notice us if you’re still panting like that.
RUDI: No. That’s not me. I am not panting. I thought it’s you.
DEO: No. I’m not.
LIGHTER OPENED SOUND
DEO & RUDI: (Screaming) WAAAAAAAAA!!
SOUND PEOPLE RUNNING, FALLING.
DEO: Rudiii. Help me.
PEOPLE RUNNING, PAUSE, RUNNING SOUND.
RUDI: Calm down, I’m trying to help you.
DEO: Please let me go. I’m sorry Fia. Sorry. [crying]
RUDI: Fia. Please let him go. Please put your hand off his leg. Just rest in peace. We didn’t do anything to you. Leave us alone.
CROW OF COCK SOUND
FIA: I just wanna help you from these ropes. I’m not a corpse, neither a dead person nor a ghost.
LIGHT ON SOUND
It’s not blood. My red marker was leaked and left a huge red stain on my dress.
DEO: But, (Pause) everyone said you’re ghost.
FIA: No, I’m not. I do look pale, but I’m not a ghost. If it’s because of the gossip in our school before, it’s not true. I don’t live there. That’s not my house. That’s a haunted house near my house. I’m not an insane girl who sit on the tree at night. Besides, I never go outside at night.
RUDI: So, what are you doing here?
FIA: Just like you, being locked here.
RUDI: Why don’t you try cry for help?
FIA: How can? I have nobody’s phone number. I have no friend, here.
RUDI: Give me your cell phone and let’s get out of here.
RUDI: (Whispering) See, she’s not a ghost.
DEO: Sorry, I thought she was.
Word Count : 970
Reference: The Raven by Edgar Allan Poe that has inspired me for this story.
Thanks to: Enjelita Pusparini and Aghnia Y.P. for being my proofreader.
Link for dramatization:
References for dramatization:
Rudi : voice by myself ( I change the pitch)
Deo: voice by myself (I change the pitch)
Fia: voice by myself (I change the pitch)
Bell ringing: http://www.sounddogs.com/results.asp?CategoryID=1008&SubcategoryID=28&Type=1
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Crowded sound: http://soundbible.com/tags-crowded.html
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Light off sound:http://www.freesound.org/people/mmaruska/sounds/232447/
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A person falling sound: http://www.sounddogs.com/results.asp?CategoryID=1024&SubcategoryID=12&Type=1
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Screaming sound: http://www.soundjay.com/scream-sound-effect.html
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Roaster sound: https://www.sounddogs.com/sound-effects/36/mp3/302480_SOUNDDOGS__ro.mp3
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Chair dragged sound:http://www.freesound.org/people/Razzvio/sounds/79571/
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